In Loving Memory - Hinochi's Writing Showcase


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  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:36
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Welcome to my Writing Showcase. This is dedicated to my grandmother, may she rest in peace, a gentle woman, owner of an enormous heart.

Here you will find several poems and other writing works. This showcase is still under construction, so you might find limited content here only, for now.

Enjoy.

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Immortal
I'm not bulletproof
Now my body lies on the roof
And now, as my wound bleeds
I disappear
Along with my creeds
Along with my needs
But I'm immortal
I can't die, I wouldn't lie
My wound heals as my soul cries
I just can't heal my heart
For now, it's shattered apart
After all the things I've left
The pain and affliction I kept
I would feel so glad to go
Even though I've already gone, a long time ago.

- Gabriel



Three Seconds to Vanishing
And I was screaming
Help me! Help me!
Don't leave me here!
My hands freezing
It's dark, I can't see
I can't see anything
Don't leave me here!
My eyes are bleeding
My teardrops are finally free
I feel like nothing
Don't leave me here!
My soul was fading
One, two, three
Three seconds to vanishing
Don't leave me here!
Don't leave me here!
Here with myself
Here, stuck in my mind
I, before so kind
Here, stuck in my own self
Don't leave me here
Set me free.



The Flight of Angels
Maybe it's the epiphany
Of my silent reveries
But my mind is in inquiry
Of what happened with all those stories
Those stories I heard and kept
About all the people I've met
From the cup of life I had a sip
Of heaven and hell that I had to keep
And if writing this I end up falling asleep
Just know that I left this written on a paper strip
That if my wings end up falling from my back
And if my soul finally turns black
I will not give up on flying
For it's no harm to keep trying
That if my toes touch the ground
Maybe I'll find what I've never found
Maybe I'll find comfort on people around
And maybe my soul will finally recover its soft sound
That sound of hope, that angels play on their harps
And will play on my spirit as well, perhaps.

- Gabriel



The Light
Tick-tock, tick-tock
I can't stop staring at the clock
And as time goes by
There's one thing I can't deny:
The night is beautiful
Knock, knock
Someone please answer the door
And welcome whoever is there, rich or poor
I will not hide anymore
Flashing lights on buildings tonight
Too many, they don't fit on my sight
If one of them came and held me tight
Then I would be all right
For I've always embraced the light.

- Gabriel



Lost Wings
Where are my wings?
I looked for them, couldn't find
I want to fly away from humankind
Where are my wings?
I don't belong to this place
I want to fly away from human race
Where are my wings?
Those golden wings I wore
I want to fly away from war
Where are my wings?
Is this my fate?
To live forever in this world of hate?
Where are my wings?
Can I be different?
Or am I supposed to pretend I am complacent?
Where are my wings?
Is loneliness my anthem?
Or is it just my phantom?
Where are my wings?
Did you steal them?
Well, if you did, give me back, then.

- Gabriel



[M]A Night on Heaven
We were on the bed
Her naked body on mine, like we were one
She touched my hair
Her hands, cold and wild
Her lips touched mine
And for one second I thought I was dreaming
Her body was so perfumed
I could feel her heartbeat
As she lied down on my chest a bit
My world stopped
There was only her
Our bodies connected
Like we were born together
My lips touched her neck
And for those minutes, I was on heaven.

- Gabriel



-Run-
Lock, lock, lock the door
This way he won't find what he's been looking for
Hide, hide, hide under the bed
So he won't find you and won't be mad
Run, run, run if you can
'Cause if you don't, he will complete his plan
Don't, don't, don't look back
Or he will make your eyes turn black
Hide, hide, hide under the bed
'Cause if you don't then you'll be... dead.

- Gabriel



Empty
For the last time
I wish I could call you mine
And as I cry
I watch myself die
Slowly, painfully
It hurts, truthfully
As long as I'm alive
So I just drive
With nowhere to go
No one to call friend or foe
I want you to know, though
That I'd call you a friend, a long time ago
Now, I am empty
And this is how I want to be
I swear I tried
I forgot about my pride
I tried to hide
But I've already died
As for you, let me be your guide
For you not to get on this ride.

- Gabriel



It's You
It's you, baby
It's you
You made me write this
For you are the one I miss
How I wanted you here tonight
For I can't live without your light
I remember we dancing on the moonlight
When I was holding you tight
It's you, baby
It's you
You made me write this
When I remembered that kiss
Dear Lord, when I look up at the sky
Please, let me fly high
So I can see my baby before I die
So I can at least say goodbye
It's you, baby
It's you
You made me write this
For your love I can't dismiss
I want to make it through
Although it's difficult, for now I'm blue
If you only knew how I wish it was untrue
But it's you, baby
It's all for you.

- Gabriel



Die Young
Take your time
I'm not going anywhere
And I don't mind
Living forever without you there
Life is too short to be worried
So go ahead and live in a hurry
Don't live for yesterday
When you can live for today
Don't live for today
When you can live for tomorrow
Don't live your life with sadness and sorrow
Always live as if today was your last day
Keep your pain unsung
Live for you, not for them
Die young.

- Gabriel



Screw it!
I'm tired of telling you to wake up
Wake up, giant! Wake up!
It's not the right time to be sleeping
Not the right time to keep pretending
That we're all fine
Wake up, giant! Wake up!
Open your eyes
Arise to the skies
And bring me back what has always been mine
Wake up, you damn giant!
Come out from the ground
It's time to turn things around
Oh, come on, you coward giant!
I'm telling you that here you can't stay
Wake up, there's no one standing in your way
This empty only you can fill
God damn! Wake up, Brazil!

- Gabriel.



I Remember
I remember it well
You told me that vampires were better than princes
That your Cadillac was better than a carriage
And that your man was tattoed and insane
I remember how you fell
You told me your choices were not my business
You told me that marriage is garbage
You told me that life is nothing but a game
I remember that motel
Your arms surrounding me
Like there was no one else on Earth
We were listening to Adele
Nashville, Tennessee
Our spiritual rebirth
I remember it well
Your eyes shining like the sky
Your comeliness that no money can buy
I swear, I would lie
If I told you I don't wish I've said good bye.



Infinite
It was you
You made me breathe
When I thought I was dead
You made me dream again
You, it was you
Even upon my death
I'll have you in my head
For you healed my pain
Your iris, blue like the sky
Your kind personality, so shy
That gleam in your eyes
That no one could deny
Those hands, that smile
A smile I could see from a mile
No one else understands your stlye
As I do, as I know you
How long this love will last is indefinite
Because with you, I feel infinite.

- Gabriel

Tribute to Logan Lerman.



Storm
I've been so lonely
Been a while since I've last heard from you
A storm rages outside my window
But even the toughest storm
Isn't raging as much as my heart is breaking
My thoughts are raining here too
There's no more blood to bleed
The blood I had has bled out in my tears
This pain stabs me deeper as I write this
Although I'm in pieces
I keep my head up for my sake
I keep a smile on my face
And everyday I wonder
Who am I cheating?
Them? Or myself?

- Gabriel



Set Fire
Set fire
Set fire to your fears
Set fire to your tears
Set fire to your heart
So no one could shatter it apart
Set fire
Set fire to your friends
And this is how it all ends:
Don't set fire to your dream
Don't set fire to that gleam
Hiding in your eyes
Set fire to the love letters on your shelf
To finally get to know yourself
After you're fine with your own self
Revive your friends from their ashes
Like a phoenix revives from its own.

- Gabriel



Death
There's a friend of mine that I want you to know
It's strong, and someday will consume your soul
You shall not avoid it or be afraid
For it will come to all of us, like I've always said
It can be painful or peaceful
And sometimes, it depends only on you
Some call it the end of all things you've been
Some say it's the most beautiful thing they've ever seen
A few think they can keep it away
But it will come to them anyway
Myths say it carries a scythe on its hand
And its ripping, no one can stand
I've heard it could hurt or heal
The hearts of those its scythe would steal
I've also heard some accept it gladly
While some fight to their last breath, sadly
Some choose to go heroically
While some go by their own actions penalty
Some people may choose to embrace it
And some think that its judgement doesn't fit
Some cry because of those it carries
Because of their friends, their allies
And by the world's most remote boundaries
Some celebrate the defeat of their enemies
But the truth is that, no matter how hard you try to avoid death
We all shall take our last breath.

- Gabriel



Salvation
I write for every mother and father who has been killed
For every brother and sister whose hopes have been sealed
I write for the future
I write for the nature
For every single time one would complain
When destruction was also their aim
And by our actions we built our deepest pain
No one wins, nothing to gain
Besides suffering and shame
I write for every single time I've heard a baby's cry
And there was no one who would care nearby
I've heard and learnt many things in this life
From loving to ripping my bounds, sharp as a knife
I've seen and known those who have nothing to eat
And those whose money, millions could feed
The destruction we cause to nature, with no remorse
Now I see it becoming something even worse
I've seen bombs, explosions, met pain as a whole
I've listened to blues, pop, reggae and rock'n'roll
I've seen humans losing their own control
By digging theirselves in a increasingly deeper hole
From the ashes of this ground I had a taste
Of love and peace that humans have thrown to waste
Blinded by their own ambition's disgrace
Of a fancy all of them embrace

I cried before death's cruelest smile
When it carried thousands, millions, hostile
I've seen suicide notes on several sheets of paper
I've seen forests turning into skyscrapers
We built our society from scratch
But we have built it fragile, in paper mache
Full of boundaries, cliche
If there's a God or gods above is our inquiry
And to prove our creeds we killed in fury
We do seek for salvation
But we'd fight and die for our nation
For our ideals are always on confrontation

If we can still be saved
It depends on how severe we have been depraved
And how hard we want to repair that truth encraved.

- Gabriel



Crimson (Haikai)
Green-eyed
Your crimson lips
Drew the paradise.

- Gabriel



Crimson (Poetry)
My blood is drowning in alcohol
I've been trying to forget what passed
Ten. Nine. Eight.
Now seven seconds left
Until I pass out
Ouch! Watch out!
I said to the door
I cut my finger there
Damn.
Three. Two.
Oh, my blood is on the carpet!
I colored it crimson.
...
One.

- Gabriel



Fate of the Gods
When men die and rest
Their souls are cursed or blessed
And sent to either Heaven or Hell
Or equivalent places as well
However, when gods say their farewell
There's nowhere for their souls to be placed
So they are for the eternity erased
No matter who tries to bring them back
They'll remain forgotten in the Universe's endless black
Be it by faith or a another god's will
The dead god shall remain this way, still.

- Gabriel



Until My Life is Through
Where are you now?
You who once made me feel so proud
Who are you now?
What are you now?
Teardrops on the floor
I don't know you anymore
It's been a while
Please stay here just for one more second
Let me be with you even just once more
I can’t accept it's all happening right now
I can’t accept that you’re gone
So can you hear me?
You have to understand
That I’ll stand, I’ll stand here by you
Until my life is through.

- Gabriel



My Immortal
I was liyng in the bed
When I heard a soft voice whispering
"Come with me"

My immortal was three steps ahead
Forever vanishing
Repeating the same plea

All the fears it fed
Slowly healing
Setting me free

Is it dead?
Forever haunting
My immortal banshee.

- Gabriel



Freak
"You're a freak"
That's what they'd call me
Ever since I was born, I knew I was different
I couldn't play hide and seek
Because I already knew where they'd be
While for some it was indifferent
For others, it was unique
But there was nothing I couldn't foresee
And for me, it was inherent
Moving objects and people from distance
That's another gift, for instance
Reading minds is not hard
Nor turning windows to glass shards
If I want, I can invoke snow, a storm
Tornadoes, cold or warmth
And as I write this, I wonder:
Does my power come from the thunder?

- Gabriel



Without You
You, I wish you knew
How I want you
And I, I can't make it through
Not without you

For your smile saved me
When nothing else could
How I wanted to be
Only you understood

And maybe in time
I'll call you mine

You gave me it all
All I needed
You got me enthralled
When I was unheeded

I won't ever see you frown
For I promise I won't ever let you down.

- Gabriel



I've Always Been Here
You're so annoying
That you make me mad
When you are around
You make me feel bad
Why do you keep annoying me so much?
When you know you are not who I want

I thought I was crazy
When I heard myself cry
In the middle of the night
In pain, 'cause I didn't say good bye
So now I avoid you because I remember
How you made me feel back then

You keep trying to find me
When I have nowhere else to hide
As I said, you annoy me
But I kinda like to have you by my side
So why don't you just let it go for now?
And stop chasing me down

When I remember you I always feel down
But I can't help it, can't keep myself on the ground
So my mind flies like there's no sky
When I think I'll forget you this time around
Come on, stop trying to find me
Because you've already found, I've always been here.

- Gabriel



Reinado de Lamúrias
Sua Majestade - me disse -
Trago a vós das mais lamentáveis notícias -
Parecia pesaroso, consternado, desgostoso -
Sois nosso Rei e vosso legado há de nos guiar
Vossa sabedoria há de nos apontar o caminho
Mas, Majestade, teus homens sucumbem
A suas próprias dores e fraquezas
Sucumbem à própria guerra que inventam por capricho

Sua Majestade
Em vosso olhar vejo compaixão
Ordenai aos homens que ascendam a bandeira branca
Perdoai aos homens por sua descrença
Fazei de vosso luto nosso chão
Outrora majestosas, nossas terras jazem esdrúxulas
Impuras e manchadas de sangue e ganância
Clamo a ti, meu senhor, que abortai a guerra de nossos corações

- Consternado com seu discurso, ao cavaleiro declarei -
Teu ódio e tua ira moldaram o mundo à tua imagem
Das tuas dores e lamúrias, vi sonhos abandonados
Por onde andei, vi flores murchas e rosas vermelhas
Pois as brancas, de sangue foram tingidas
E se a dor do mundo desejas extinguir
Sugiro que comeces por si

Teu ódio é tua dor e o teu pesar
Dos teus olhos, emanam a ganância e o poder
Tua alma já foi bela, mas agora, junto a ti, sucumbiu
Do teu egoísmo, do nosso egoísmo, vi crianças morrerem
Vi povos, culturas e mundos desaparecerem
E se por tua dor queres mudar o mundo
Eu te digo: Antes de mudar o mundo, mude quem tu és.

- Gabriel



As Mãos que Tecem o Futuro
Aprendemos muito em nossa caminhada
Do mais trivial dos desejos, à mais sincera das esperanças
Olhando sempre à frente, de alma vazia e desamparada
Mas sem jamais desistir dessas andanças
Ouvi dizer que o mundo muda em um piscar de olhos
Que a vida passa, que é mais rápida que a luz
Que não existem atalhos, que a vida é cheia de empecilhos
Mas que podemos escolher o caminho, que fazemos o que nos conduz
Ouvi dizer que os anjos caíram
Deixaram o mundo vazio e despreparado
Ouvi dizer que os sonhos sumiram
Dos olhos dos povos apavorados
Ouvi dizer que amores vêm e vão
Ouvi dizer que a vida não é em vão
As histórias dos homens loucos, porque agora são
Porque a humanidade é louca, ninguém mais é são
Soube que a vida é tratada ao acaso
Quando sei que, na verdade, é tratada com descaso
Ouvi de alguns que não confiam no próprio irmão
Que a humanidade desaprendeu a estender a mão
Vi com meus olhos a natureza degradada
Por nós, homens, julgada e condenada
Sem ar, sem cor, Amazônia desmatada
E a esperança que agora jaz amassada, queimada
Mas será esse o nosso futuro?
Seriam nossos corações tão impuros?
Será que para o nossos filhos, o mundo será seguro?
Ou teríamos nós, em nossa ignorância, deixado-os em apuros?

- Gabriel



Undesirable Thoughts
I thought you knew it wasn't fair
I thought you would understand
But you didn't

You thought I'd wait forever
You thought I'd stand by you
But I didn't

They thought we were meant to be together
They thought it was all flowers
But it wasn't

Now it's all getting darker
Colder, deeper, sadder
I think it's time to close my eyes.

Forever.

- Gabriel



Désorienté

Je suis fatigué d'attendre pour vous
Je suis perdu et désorienté
Mon coeur est déchiré maintenant
Mais j'espère être rappelé
Car je vous aime encore.

- Gabriel



Pour la Paix

La douleur est universelle
Ce qui est universel est l'amour
Nos coeurs sont unis
Appelant pour la paix

La justice est souverain
Indéfectible et forte
Il permettra de protéger les faibles
Pour les sauver, à la mort.

- Gabriel
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Last Night
Last night I heard your voice
You sang to me
You sang to my soul

I felt I had no choice
I thought no one would listen to my plea
But you made me whole

I saw your strong light
Shining and lighting up the dark sky
Healing all my pain

You then disappeared from my sight
But what you've done, no one could deny
For you gave me the chance to live again.

- Gabriel



Midnight Phantom
It was midnight.
I heard its footsteps on the rough boards of the floor. They sounded like cannon bullets. I tried to calm down, but things were so messed up in my head. I was afraid. I was afraid of death. Not my death. Its death. That being, slowly approaching of me. Coming closer, creepingly.
Like a scared child, I hid under the bed, in the hopes of becoming invisible to that thing. The door slowly opened. Horrifying noise. The footsteps getting louder. And louder. And louder.

Silence.

Then the clock. Tik, tok.

Then the TV in the living room.
No one was watching.

Tik... tok...
Those seconds would last forever.

Silence...

Silence...

Silence.

It walked away from me. The footsteps getting weaker. And weaker... until that thing vanished.

I locked the door.

- Gabriel



About Her.
Your eyes... I remember them.
They used to stare at me, like I was made of gold. They would chase my soul and go so deep, that it would hit even my deepest memories. How could I ever forget those sparkly moss green eyes? How could I ever forget them, if they made me feel so glad, glad for having the pleasure to see them?
And your voice. Oh, your voice. It was soft, kind. You sounded like an angel. I loved it when you got embarrassed after singing to me. You sang me to sleep. And I slept well. I had a dream, with you. And you kept singing there. For the eternity singing, dancing, pleasuring me with your beautiful voice. I was in paradise.
I've always loved your hair. It was so beautiful. You... you have always been so beautiful. Your red, straigth, soft hair. And its smell. Your smell. Like you were made of flowers. Like you were a tiny heavenly petal.
Your hands were cold, but your heart was always burning. Your touch was shy, but intense. You were behaved, but your soul... Your soul was wild. And that was explicit when you took off my clothes and threw them on the floor.
I loved you. God, how I loved you.
Now I love you even more.

- Gabriel



Under My Skin
I've been walking for so long
But I'm going nowhere
I got lost on my own
But I don't really care

I've lost my sense of direction
As much as I've lost my light
And now it's just a small fraction
So my soul is drown in an endless night

Things I've done that have been forgotten
Everything that I've been
Now my hopes lie hidden
Under my skin.

- Gabriel



Nothing to Gain
I've stambled and fell
I've cried and lived my private hell
And out of many things I wish I could tell
The one that hurts the most is your farewell

You've gone and now I feel your pain
And that makes me afraid of falling again
Life is like this, it's impossible to explain
Nothing to lose, but nothing to gain.



Stay.
I've been trying hard not to feel down
Been trying hard not to show my frown
And I must admit, it's easier now
You make me feel better somehow

Your smile has saved me from my worst nightmares
Your touch has taken away my air
Just wish you knew that, if I'm here today
That's because you made me stay.

- Gabriel
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Dear friend,

I'm writing this letter because for some obvious reasons I don't feel good. It's been a while since I arrived here, at this hospital full of psychopaths and weird people. And believe me: they are actually way more weird than me. I have an eerie feel that I kinda like it here, and that's what makes me feel bad. When I first came in through the door, I wasn't even conscious, since I tried to cut my fists last week. Now I feel better, although the more I think I could be deceased right now, the more I regret I didn't cut myself with more intensity. However, I'm slowly getting better. You know, since you left this world, I've been drawn in extremely deppressive feelings. I don't feel like waiting for tomorrow. Today I woke up to see a shiny sunrise, and felt alive. I felt something different. I felt I was finally going to participate and belong to somewhere. But again, those feelings lied to me. They ceased so quickly that I couldn't even take the opportunity to feel something changed inside of me. I'm still listening to the same sad songs, I'm still seeing my life as a cloudy sky, an endless nightmare. Why did you have to pass away, when you were most needed? Despite being deppressed, something deep in the cell of my heart tells me to keep going and keep my head up. I hope I'm right. Don't take it as an offense, but I don't really want to end like you. I just want you to know that I miss you. Every single day. I hope you're fine wherever you are. Who knows I'll find you again someday. Until that day comes, I just want you to know you'll be forever here, with me, and I'll always love you.

Love always, Gabriel
May 21st, 2014.



Dear friend,

It's cold here tonight. I feel like the more I try to forget the miserable life I'm taking now, the more I feel like it's not going to change. I remember staring at the sky for several minutes and thinking of you. Every now and then I recall school. You know, the absolute majority of people I know hate school. But I miss it. My friends were there, and we had such amazing and beautiful moments together. These are all just stories now.
I've been trying hard not to get into trouble or not to try anything stupid anymore. I'm my worst enemy, and my greatest ally, indeed. I kinda miss having someone with whom I can talk and be myself everyday. Loneliness is my worst nightmare.
Times have been difficult now that those I love are away from me. I'm the only one who still believes on selfish dreams and is willing to forget about everyone and everything to go for them. Well, guess I'm just a psycho after all.
Please, don't be offended, but I hope you understand that I'm somewhat better without you here, so you can't tell me what I can or cannot do. That's what makes me keep going. Of course I miss you, but all I do, I do for you. I want you to see me and be proud of me, wherever you are. That's why I keep my head up.
Hope you're doing good.

Love always, Gabriel
April 6th, 2015.



Dear friend,

Remember when I told you faith could move mountains? I think I was wrong. I think we move mountains. Not faith. I'm not someone who actually believes in a superior being, but I'm someone who believes in love. Love is the cure.
Oh, you once asked me what superpower I'd like to have. I was between flying and manipulating weather. I'm still between those. I could fly away from my problems, or at least manipulate the sky so that it would be clear, instead of that rain outside that makes me feel down. You know, you could help me pick one. Also, forgot to tell you that I think I'm in love with someone. This one person does not even know I exist, though. She's famous. That kinda sucks, you know, but I think that's what people call a fan after all.
Last week I was playing the piano and I felt you. You were there, weren't you? Guiding me, moving my hands as I played. I cried. You knew I was playing for you, and you helped me. That was great. Thanks.
It's still cold here. I think I'm gonna wear a sweather soon.

Love always, Gabriel
April 6th, 2015.
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Hinochi's Heikogan
And she was there.
There were no ways I could be sure who was that girl. But every single time I closed my eyes, she appeared. Pink, long hair. A beautiful face, piercing orange eyes. She seemed to be dangerous, but also seemed to have a beautiful heart, that I felt like I should try to light up. She also wasn't tall, nor short. She was just average, and carried a sign of a different nation I wasn't sure of in her chest, as I carry the Earth Nation sign. I could feel her strength, and the extention of her powers. That girl was, for sure, the most powerful being that I've ever met.
For a reason I don't know, her left eye was covered by a hairflip, and I felt uncomfortable when trying to stare at her eyes.
- What's your name? Who are you? - I said, in the hopes of getting solid answers.
- I am the death. I am the life.
I'm the bringer of peace. The announcer of chaos.
I'm the end, and the beginning of all times.
I'm the almighty goddess, Keinan. - she answered, with a misterious air.

Well, if she was a goddess, that would explain all that power I felt when standing next to her. All of that endless mistery was driving me crazy, and I could not stop thinking about that. She slowly uncovered her left eye, and stared at me. That was painful. My eyes started bleeding. She then said, calmly:

- I understand you don't remember me. I understand you can't recall any of the moments we lived. But I am introducing myself to you this one time only. Make sure you'll remember your older sister the next time, Hinochi.

I was scared.
- I have no siblings! My parents are dead. I've always been alone. - I said, trembling.
- You have. You have two, actually. Me, and someone you know very well... - She said, with a serious face.
- Who is that?
- Kazurin.

After saying that, she vanished. So, wait: how the hell is Kazurin, my worst enemy, the one who destroyed dozens of planets only by himself my brother? Something was wrong, and I couldn't accept that.
My eyes were still hurting and bleeding. After staring at her eyes, they were throbbing. And I swear: after opening them, I could see everything clearly, every single detail in everything I wanted. I could see things in slow camera. I could see my own bones. Not sure, I focused on a tree that was close. The tree disintegrated and was turned into ashes on the ground.
I heard a thunder. He arrived. Kazurin, the God of Chaos. Sarcastically, he approached of me.

- Look who's here. Hinochi, the one who will become the most powerful being in the universe. The Almighty God of Apocalypse.
- What the hell are you saying? I'm nothing but a normal mage. - I said.
- You were. Now that you have those eyes, you won't be anymore.
- What are you talking about?
- That's the first stage of the Heikogan, the Eye of Equilibrium. - he knocked me down on the ground, and spit on my face. - So you met Keinan, with her Hikarigan, the Eye of Light. I have the Yamigan, the Eye of Darkness. If you haven't noticed, you have both, that's why it's Heikogan. Good luck, brother.

And by saying this, Kazurin flew as fast as an arrow. And I was left there, confused, bleeding. Here I had my blackout. I can't remember anything after this.
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  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:37
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  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:38
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#on : I'm waiting for your edit and I'm sorry for your grandmother .

#edit: More narratives please. ♡♡
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  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:40
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RIP Hinochi grandmother. :(

  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:40
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  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:43
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Lol Hinochi
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  Posted on April 2, 2015 20:55
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Rip Hinochi grandmother :(
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  Posted on April 2, 2015 21:12
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nice . i like this one


-Run-
Lock, lock, lock the door
This way he won't find what he's been looking for
Hide, hide, hide under the bed
So he won't find you and won't be mad
Run, run, run if you can
'Cause if you don't, he will complete his plan
Don't, don't, don't look back
Or he will make your eyes turn black
Hide, hide, hide under the bed
'Cause if you don't then you'll be... dead.

- Gabriel
  Posted on April 2, 2015 21:14
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nice showcase sorry for your loss
  Posted on April 6, 2015 04:27
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Tyvm for your support guys!
New poem added:

Die Young
Take your time
I'm not going anywhere
And I don't mind
Living forever without you there
Life is too short to be worried
So go ahead and live in a hurry
Don't live for yesterday
When you can live for today
Don't live for today
When you can live for tomorrow
Don't live your life with sadness and sorrow
Always live as if today was your last day
Keep your pain unsung
Live for you, not for them
Die young.

- Gabriel
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  Posted on April 7, 2015 01:18
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Letters and Narrative Prose added! Check posts #3 and #4!
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RONALDO.
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