Simply Trapping


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  Posted on July 26, 2014 07:24
rhoji767
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#1
The quaint lounging of soft words off the razor's edge, as apostrophes they say
balanced progression with a clouded cadence
raining misconception of what my character could be
replaced by that of which a mental complexion should be
mechanically conjuring visions of the urban turmoil
they preserve those, statistical breakdowns of man by his traits and POs
placing shackles upon those who trap to stay out a cage
but are trapped in a cage, within a cage, within a cage
puppet masters perfecting the trifecta of sealing trios
becoming Lions instead of Leos, imprisoned kings of the jungle
pitted against one another, that hollowed anthem Echoing "Rumble young man rumble."
the show coming to a close those who came to sea flows
like Black neighborhoods and peep holes
couldn't believe they'd been exposed.
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  Posted on July 26, 2014 07:31
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truly a piece of art you've got here rho.
as a writer myself, I do say anyone who chooses not to give this a read (and actually understand) is missing out.
poems of this substance and magnitude aren't usually found here, at least not in my gazing of the writings posted.
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  Posted on July 26, 2014 07:41
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goddamn
epic shit.....
  Posted on July 26, 2014 07:51
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#4
I read this through twice. It's pretty deep. Nice work.
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  Posted on July 26, 2014 08:06
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#5
you probably dont know half the words meaning you placed in there, some didnt fit but still okay
  Posted on July 26, 2014 09:32
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That was some deep shit mang
  Posted on July 26, 2014 11:32
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Tai27 wrote:
I read this through twice. It's pretty deep. Nice work.

I Agree
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