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  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:42
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Please rate and provide constructive criticism
Note: there aren't any classes yet...that's all that he's lacking.

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  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:44
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Do dragon ballz characters use Taijutsu,bloodline and ninjutusu chakras?

Edit : @ below okays then 4/10 pics are lq
  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:46
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NarutoMinato11 wrote:
Do dragon ballz characters use Taijutsu,bloodline and ninjutusu chakras?
Oh for God's sake, the character was made for N-a, so it has N-a costs. Please just rate the skills overall
If you insist on knowing why I kept the N-a costs, it's because they all can apply to DBZ too in a way. Taijutsu = physical skills, Ninjutsu = energy skills, Genjutsu = illusions of any kind, mental skills, etc., and Bloodline = skills unique to certain characters.

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  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:52
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Increase damage on shard storm, or remove cd. 15 with cd would be good.

Pics overcolored. Its DBZ (old) so quality seems like the best I would ever get.


I like it. 9/10
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  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:54
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Lord_Akatsuki wrote:
Increase damage on shard storm, or remove cd. 15 with cd would be good.

Pics overcolored.


I like it. 9/10
Thank you And ok, that advice sounds good.
I'm just confused on one thing: overcolored pics?

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  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:55
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9

  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:56
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zacrathedemon5 wrote:
Lord_Akatsuki wrote:
Increase damage on shard storm, or remove cd. 15 with cd would be good.

Pics overcolored.


I like it. 9/10
Thank you And ok, that advice sounds good.
I'm just confused on one thing: overcolored pics?

You made the colors too vivid, hurts my eyes a bit lol

color sharpness
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  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:56
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I don't like the pics.
  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:59
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final form: op, perm 25% decrease? and used twice? so it can only activate twice or used overall 2 times no matter the outcome?

demention slice: WAY OP: 35 pericing that ignores invuln and upts the cost of chakra? then you make it so it can be even easier to use?

and im not big on blade foration, only 5 points reduction when he already has 25% reduction...

those are the flaws i see so...

5/10
  Posted on July 30, 2011 10:59
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naruto554466 wrote:
I don't like the pics.
Can you rate it based on the skills then, please?
flavius_dolca wrote:
9
Thank you
Lord_Akatsuki wrote:
zacrathedemon5 wrote:
Lord_Akatsuki wrote:
Increase damage on shard storm, or remove cd. 15 with cd would be good.

Pics overcolored.


I like it. 9/10
Thank you And ok, that advice sounds good.
I'm just confused on one thing: overcolored pics?

You made the colors too vivid, hurts my eyes a bit lol

color sharpness
Ah I see I'll try to work on that.
yankotsu wrote:
final form: op, perm 25% decrease? and used twice? so it can only activate twice or used overall 2 times no matter the outcome?

demention slice: WAY OP: 35 pericing that ignores invuln and upts the cost of chakra? then you make it so it can be even easier to use?

and im not big on blade foration, only 5 points reduction when he already has 25% reduction...

those are the flaws i see so...

5/10
1. I put the "Can only be used twice" there meaning that if you use it twice and it isn't triggered either time, you can't use it again. If you use it once and it is triggered, then you can't use it again because it permanently becomes Blade Formation. Hope that cleared up some confusion.

2. Naruto (S) already deals 40 piercing dmg. that ignores invulnerability and has no cooldown....for the exact same cost as Dimension Slice. I can see you being a little skeptical about the chakra disruption, though. And I make it easier to use by sacrificing 5 of its damage...should I sacrifice more damage, perhaps, to make it more balanced? Decrease its damage to 25?

3. Should I just eliminate the 5 points of dmg. reduction altogether on that move?

Thank you for the constructive criticism, by the way. I appreciate it

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  Posted on July 30, 2011 11:04
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EDIT: I double posted by accident... I understand if I'm warned x________x Sorry for the trouble.

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  Posted on July 30, 2011 11:12
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i would suggest:

lose the 5 reduction from blade formation, and make it so that when its activated is when it upts the cost of a chakra to the enemy, dont make that a standard effect of the move, and make it so it also boosts shard storm to 15 so its not only used for the one skill, if you boost the strength of the shard storm then yes lower the damage to 25 (for this move useage only) so that the damages are balanced, one beat down, and one weak AOE, then when you use blade formation it turs it into 2 medium strengthed moves...

hope it makes sense
  Posted on July 30, 2011 20:26
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yankotsu wrote:
i would suggest:

lose the 5 reduction from blade formation, and make it so that when its activated is when it upts the cost of a chakra to the enemy, dont make that a standard effect of the move, and make it so it also boosts shard storm to 15 so its not only used for the one skill, if you boost the strength of the shard storm then yes lower the damage to 25 (for this move useage only) so that the damages are balanced, one beat down, and one weak AOE, then when you use blade formation it turs it into 2 medium strengthed moves...

hope it makes sense
Thank you very much, those are very good ideas
Edit: The character is fixed

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  Posted on January 5, 2012 03:07
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10.

  Posted on January 5, 2012 03:19
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kakashialisson wrote:
10.
Woah, thanks!

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