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  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:05
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Beautiful Creature in some time you'll see

Man has explored the beauty of the world , yet only 10 percent of the sea

You have to give it time , for time heals all

With time truths are separated from lies, and the walls of your future fall

Perfectly orchestrated yet completely unpredictable

Time is like a powerful force of nature , so frightening yet so mystical

I see nothing but success and light in your future

Those are some powerful words coming from a pessimistic user

Sweet thing my sweet thing you have to give it a rest

Stop trying to predict, analyze and coordinate your future for the best

Because it's out of your hands , your fathers hands, humanity and the rest

For Destiny alone has the ability to guide you through your quest

It's ok to take your hands off the handles and ride your bicycle with no hands

Because regardless of how hard you try to control it, you can't control when you fall and how you'll land

What's meant to happen is exactly what will be

So take everyone's hands of the wheel , float through the wind and let time set you free



Wrote this for my gf , what do you guys think ? What are your opinions and what do you think poem is saying
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  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:39
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Your poem is lovely.

10/10
  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:47
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Marceline wrote:
Your poem is lovely.

10/10

Didn't know you had that in you.
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  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:49
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douglasvsnaruto wrote:
Marceline wrote:
Your poem is lovely.

10/10

Didn't know you had that in you.

Same
  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:49
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douglasvsnaruto wrote:
Marceline wrote:
Your poem is lovely.

10/10

Didn't know you had that in you.
You should've seen the original post
  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:49
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douglasvsnaruto wrote:
Marceline wrote:
Your poem is lovely.

10/10

Didn't know you had that in you.
Don't get too excited, he forgot to put the /s.

More, out of curiosity, is English your first language?

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  Posted on May 12, 2016 05:57
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choppy wrote:
douglasvsnaruto wrote:
Marceline wrote:
Your poem is lovely.

10/10

Didn't know you had that in you.
Don't get too excited, he forgot to put the /s.

More, out of curiosity, is English your first language?


English is my second language .

And thanks for the opinions guys I'm glad you liked it
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  Posted on May 12, 2016 07:40
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Lovely.
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  Posted on May 12, 2016 09:51
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@inb4 your gf does not believe in destiny
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  Posted on September 11, 2016 13:11
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Marceline wrote:
Your poem is lovely.

10/10

Also in the wrong section.

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